- Use of ‘random’ in a ‘cool’ way.
- Wrong use of upper-case words.
- Badly fitting ASCII characters to make an image.
- The fact that the image depicts an iPod Nano, or at the very least a normal iPod, and not the mentioned iPod Shuffle (which, FYI, has no screen).
- Wrongly capitalised ‘iPod’.
On the plus side:
- The sentence starts with capital.
- The sentences ends with only one exclamation mark!
- It only makes use of one colour.